"Mommy said..."
"Mommy said"I satOn a bench,AloneIn the mall,Mommy saidShed be right backBut that wasA while ago.I heldMy teddy bearClose toMy heart,And I watchedEvery personWalk past meWithout notice.I nervouslyPut...
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omg... (the post says 'edit' because the above is all I could manage the first time...)This has to be one of the most powerful, emotional, brace-yourself-you're-gonna-be-bawling works I have ever...
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It never happened... Thank you so much Skrib, I am honored by your wonderful words, I really appreciate them. I was feeling abandoned by some of my friends... and this came out... Thank you very much...
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what is real sad is that happens all the timedavidrealistic readdavid
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Okay, I've been sitting here for awhile in shock trying to think of what to say to this "POWERFUL, EMOTIONAL PIECE!!!"This is like mega-intense Mystic! The whole thing is outstanding; that closing...
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written with the innocense of a child .... and a heart that knows the fear and pain of abandonment. there is something very unique to the fear felt when feeling utterly and completely alone in the...
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When my daughter was little she had a way of running off in stores, my worst fear was of losing her, so I soon quit going shopping. I didn't go to the mall again till she was about 7. But I can't...
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Mystic, I always find your work to be full of emotions, but this one just blows the emotional meter scale all to bits. I was on the edge of my seat and watching with this little girl for any sign of...
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David~ yeah, that is... thank you very much david, i appreciate your comments.Mike~ Need a tissue? I went out and bought a new box... now i have plenty.. Thank you so very much my friend, I will...
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